Is this really happening?
When did we become so far apart,
when did we become strangers?
I put my faith in you, so much faith,
and then you just threw it away.
I never wanted to say this,
I'm sorry;
I know my words cut you inside,
but I'm only speaking the truth.
It can't hurt you anywhere near as worse as the pain you've caused me.
The pain.
The scars.
I hope you know,
we'll never be the same.
And I'm okay,
I'm okay with that.
Gosh :( I feel terrible after reading this, for multiple reasons, but that's for another time. It's really emotionally powered, and there's a lot of diction (yay, english terms!) in it, all over, and that makes it very strong in terms of feeling. I love how it's written but I don't like what it's written about :/ if that makes sense. I'm not knocking your piece, I'm just not liking whatever drove you to write this :| I'm here for ya if you need someone to talk to, kiddo.
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