Monday, December 8, 2008

Wild

She stared at the mirror. The empty wild eyes that stared back at her were frightening and unfamiliar. Her dirty hair was lank and hung around her neck without a purpose. She didn't care anymore. Nothing mattered to her anymore. No one knew her anymore. As she looked at her crazed reflection, she remembered that the only thing keeping her sane was gone. The reflection was the last thing she saw before the anger and sadness took over. She was lost forever.

2 comments:

  1. wow this piece of yours is amazing. it's one of the best pieces i have ever seen from you. it's really good and sad at the same time, but i really like it. nice work :]

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  2. I like it, but i think you should cut back on the pro-nouns, but it might make it a little hard to understand.

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