Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Leaf


The leaves swirl around us as we walk down the small dirt path. Just me and you, you and I, no one else. You take my hand as we walk, I sigh. Wishing we could stay like this forever, just walking. Walking nowhere, just to be. To be with you longer. Already dreading that moment that has to come, the moment you let go.


5 comments:

  1. First off, you are the first site I've visited that worked correctly! You have to show the class how you did this, okay?
    I love how the site looks. Journaling is some of the most sound writing, strongest writing you do and I'm glad you're getting to do more with it now.

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  2. i really like this one. it's really beautiful =) keep up the greeaatttt work!!!

    <3 kaylala

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  3. This is your best journal writing yet, at least of the ones you have up :)

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  4. abby this is pretty good, and it has a ton of meaning behind it.

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